Living in this world...alone{(open)} « Result #1 on Aug 11, 2008, 4:18pm »
The night was silent. The moon was shining bright. The occasional cloud or two was in the sky. Through the trees, and into the clearing, you could see a figure walking across the grass. Josie walked until she was in the center of the clearing. She sat down and fell backwards. She was sprawled on the ground. Her silver eyes glance at the moon. Josie stretched out her fingers; she began to move her hand in a motion that appeared as if she was stroking the moon. A tear fell down her face. ''Duncan'' she whispered very quietly.
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Re: Nixon Stylus AKA Chemsprayer « Result #5 on Aug 9, 2008, 5:39pm »
Needs Editing
If he is human, how is he 312, appearing 23?
This isn't supposed to be a science-fiction site. Either your character is a vampire or he's not. There's no way for him to be the immortal human thing you've got here, because that would be unfair to the other players on the site. You would be taking the good stuff [immortality] without taking the bad stuff [dependance on blood].
We also try not to focus too much on killing; fighting is OK, because when you merge vampires into human society, it's going to happen. But if you're killing vampires then you are also killing someone's characters. Which isn't very nice.
I promise I'm not picking on you. I see this is your style, but it needs tweaking to fit into the site. That's all.
[By the way: your signature is to big -- it's stretching the page.]
Josie Sanders « Result #8 on Aug 5, 2008, 11:40am »
Name: Josie Maggie Sanders Race: Vampire Age: She is really 50, but she is eternally 25 Date of Birth: October 5, 1958 Date of Change: June 18, 1983 Coven:Ashen Sire: Duncan Cormane, deceased Power(s): Healing; she can heal any physical wounds but she can't fix anything emotional or mental. When she is fixing the wound, the pain triples in intensity. She can control this white light with a dark purple tinge. It can cut through any inanimate object and can enter a humans thoughts.
Appearance: Josie has long, flowing black hair. It's silky smooth and shines when the light hits it just right. She has light grey eyes, just like mist when it rains. She is tall, 5' 10'', and slender. Her hair is never tied up, so ocassionaly it goes over her shoulders. She wears a dark purple tank top that fits her snugly. It shows cleavage, but not that much. She wears a medium length dark purple skirt. Under her skirt is a pair of dark denim jeans that also fit her snugly. She wears a plain brown belt. Josie wears a necklace that has a charm of a moon.
Attitude: Josie is quiet, until you get to know her. She is smart and some what strong. Josie is a leader, not a follower. She can be funny, bu nobody really sees that side of her. She is lonely and doesn't trust easily. She is very rebellious. Josie loves to watch the moon and go to Club Skunk. She fears of getting to close to someone because something might happen to them, just like what happened in her past.
History: Josie was born in Minnesota. As a child, she grew up to believe that fairy tales and such was all a lie. Her neighbors had a son who was the same age as Josie. his name was Duncan. They would run around during the night and watch the stars. Once they were 11, Duncan revealed his secret. He was a vampire. Josie didn't believe him. Then, that very night, she found out he was right. Duncan and Josie became very tight. One day, Duncan told Josie he loved her. They went on a couple of dates and they were happy.
Josie begged Duncan to turn her into a vampire when she was 25. She said she couldn't bear the pain knowing she would grow old while he would live forever. He finally agreed many weeks later. He bit into her neck and turned her into a vampire. They lived happily for a couple of years in the Ashen coven. One day, during a fight with the Delmos, Duncan died. Josie was so upset, she lived alone for 3 whole years. Once she came out of her depression, she was a totally different person.
Sample Post: Josie walked through the crowd, making her way to the humans. She was hungry and she needed blood. She looked at a human; a male, O+. She approached him. She glanced at his hazel eyes, asking for permission. He nodded, telling her to go ahead. She revealed her fangs and pierced the skin. She licked the blood flowing down his arm. He shuddered when she did so. She licked the wound and then her lips. She lifted her head up and walked away. The man put his sleeve back down and turned to his next customer. Josie sat down and watched the crowd dancing. 'This singwas too slow. Maybe I'll dance the the next one' she thought.
Re: Don't be deceived. « Result #9 on Jul 20, 2008, 3:40am »
The girl appeared behind Horus. Horus just laughed at the girls words. "You just made a fatal mistake." Horus continued to laugh. He was now in his prime element, melee combat. Horus's armor appeared to come alive. Electrical sparks started to fly off his blood red armor. "Are you willing to burn?" Horus turned to face the girl. His secret was now revealed. He was now a crackling fountain of energy, safely protected inside his armored plates. No one would be dumb enough to touch him while his exterior plates were charged with over 2000 volts of pure energy.
Re: Don't be deceived. « Result #10 on Jul 19, 2008, 1:40pm »
As he fired at her she used a good old skill that her mother had shown her, speed. With the blink of an eye she was behind him laughing in her childish joy. "What a gun, what are going to do...shot me, and then what. I would kill you before a bullet struck me, and if it did I would just heal. I am so afraid of the big bad tin can."
it baffled her that humans believed somehow they could shot a gun off and kill a vampire. What side of the stupid bed did he get up on. Obviously the one with extra pathetic. All the same she stood there with her hands on her hips smiling at him.
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